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Post by Zoriku on Tue Mar 26, 2013 2:55 am


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Post by Pivotfantasy on Tue Mar 26, 2013 7:52 am

There is a bit of a shakiness problem.. As well as flow, and all those other factors. You need to work on the basics a bit more. If you don't know these concepts, hopefully i will have a tutorial on the basics up for you (im working on it Razz) Btw, welcome to the forum, im fantasy and i hope you have a great time here Smile
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Post by TOLBIAS on Tue Jul 02, 2013 12:54 am

Low Begginer. You lack easing and spacing. For example on your newest animation the stick just punched, stopped then punched again. You need to make yor punches smooth and fast at the same time. Also try to move all joints so your stick does not look stiff.

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Post by sifterpivoter on Mon Jul 08, 2013 3:27 pm

As people said earlier, you lack the basics such as easing and flow and foot placement..etc.
But to go deeply, I'll cc the latest animation: (cc is counstructive critism in case you didn't know.)
The animation it self doesn't look so good, and I'll explain why. Just read carfuly what I'm going to say:

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1st off, the camera's shakiness isn't needed since it just gives bad feeling to your eyes as well as the speed trail or however you call it.
As for the basics:
The animatin doesn't look smooth, and that mainly because the motionpath isn't curvey. The foot placement's off, the feet must be stuck to the ground and they shouldn't move even a single pixel untill he takes another step.
You shouldn't care much about easing and flow for now, but I will give you a clue about them:
-Easing is when ou gradualy increase then decrease you speed.
-Flow is an eased transition between a move and another.
Don't feel bad about yourself, and don't get mad at me as well hahaha, you just started your journey, so it's normal that your animation won't be as good as you want to, just visit the tutorial section and practice what you learned, but I must warn you: Never get than mentallity of "Nah, I know this or I know that" because it will lead you nowhere.

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