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ajS - MAKE IT STAHP!!!!

Post by ajS on Thu Jan 10, 2013 6:59 pm





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Post by Towelie on Thu Jan 10, 2013 9:04 pm

Alright. The first issue I noticed is the footplacement. If you look at his feet, you can see that they are shaking up and down, which doesn't make sense. And when he lands, he lands a lot longer down than where he started. As he moves his front leg back he also slides backwards. To avoid shakyness, you should go through your animation frame by frame in pivot, and make sure his legs are at the exact same spot the entire time(unless he's moving his foot away from the current position). Adding a ground usually helps.

Another problem is your poses. I know nothing about backflips, so I can't tell if the poses in the backflip are unrealistic, and such, but the way the stickman were standing when the animation ended looked weird as f**k xD I felt like the entire animation went a bit fast too, but that might just have been me. Anyways good job, man. You've got a lot of potential, just keep working at it.


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Post by ajS on Fri Jan 11, 2013 9:29 am

Towelie wrote:Alright. The first issue I noticed is the footplacement. If you look at his feet, you can see that they are shaking up and down, which doesn't make sense. And when he lands, he lands a lot longer down than where he started. As he moves his front leg back he also slides backwards. To avoid shakyness, you should go through your animation frame by frame in pivot, and make sure his legs are at the exact same spot the entire time(unless he's moving his foot away from the current position). Adding a ground usually helps.

Another problem is your poses. I know nothing about backflips, so I can't tell if the poses in the backflip are unrealistic, and such, but the way the stickman were standing when the animation ended looked weird as fuck xD I felt like the entire animation went a bit fast too, but that might just have been me. Anyways good job, man. You've got a lot of potential, just keep working at it.



Yep fixing em now

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Post by ajS on Fri Jan 11, 2013 6:25 pm

fixed the footing

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Post by Towelie on Fri Jan 11, 2013 6:59 pm

Looks a lot better now, man. His footplacement is still off after he landed, though. And you should try ending the movement completely. He just stops at a weird pose. Fix that and the whole animation will look a lot better. For a first backflip it's really good, though Smile
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Post by JojoI3a on Fri Jan 11, 2013 8:21 pm

I remember my first backflip looked Like that. Close to high novice, Good job.
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Post by Inevitable on Sun Jan 13, 2013 3:00 pm

Work your foot placement. I see no flaws except foot placement. Well done :>
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Post by ajS on Mon Jan 21, 2013 5:10 am

UPDATE!

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Post by Inevitable on Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:48 pm

The running should be a bit smoother than that, it's way too fast. Also, he didn't seem like jumping, try to make the spacing a bit closer to each other because it looks too fast and unrealistic. The physics is nice and the front flip was OK, I guess. You need to work on your poses, flow, and foot placement. Though, you've done better than before so keep it up! ^^
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Post by prince910 on Wed Jan 30, 2013 5:05 pm

hi begiez?
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Post by ajS on Thu Feb 14, 2013 9:54 am

UPDATE!

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Post by Inevitable on Thu Feb 14, 2013 10:03 pm

The cartwheel was too fast, smooth it down by adding more frames.
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Post by ajS on Sun Mar 31, 2013 8:25 am

Update (Note: The "Wraybies Inspired" animation is supposed to be stiff at the end)

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Post by Pivotfantasy on Sun Mar 31, 2013 9:02 am

I think it looked great until after the back hand springs when he jumped up and did the twirl in the air. At that point, he was a bit shaky, but i must say, i really liked it Smile. I really liked the footplacement thoug Smile Hm.... Id say if u fixed the shakiness, you would be high beg, maybe borderline interz Smile. Keep it up
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Post by ajS on Sun Jun 30, 2013 5:46 pm

Newest animation :

Don't ever listen to Tolbie (tolbias)

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Post by ajS on Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:33 pm

ADDED NEW ANIMATION: be careful though there is alot of lag in the piv due to the effect of the slashing.

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Post by ajS on Mon Jul 08, 2013 3:33 pm

Update yo, planning on making the stickman kick at the end so..

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Post by ajS on Tue Jul 09, 2013 6:37 pm

DONE! Finished off that animation

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Post by ajS on Wed Jul 17, 2013 1:58 pm

These are my last few animations.

So this week I animated nothing but combo's. However I suck.  Anyway here they are :

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Post by ajS on Wed Jul 24, 2013 7:21 pm

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