ajS - MAKE IT STAHP!!!!
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ajS - MAKE IT STAHP!!!!
Hi! Welcome to my thread, I started pivot back in June 2012, and here I am now. Running a Forum, animating, reaching new heights, making dreams come true, and, making dreams come true for others too! Please don't hesitate to ask anything of me, I'll respond as soon as I can. Peace out COMRADES!
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Last edited by ajS on Wed Jul 24, 2013 7:20 pm; edited 29 times in total
Re: ajS - MAKE IT STAHP!!!!
Alright. The first issue I noticed is the footplacement. If you look at his feet, you can see that they are shaking up and down, which doesn't make sense. And when he lands, he lands a lot longer down than where he started. As he moves his front leg back he also slides backwards. To avoid shakyness, you should go through your animation frame by frame in pivot, and make sure his legs are at the exact same spot the entire time(unless he's moving his foot away from the current position). Adding a ground usually helps.
Another problem is your poses. I know nothing about backflips, so I can't tell if the poses in the backflip are unrealistic, and such, but the way the stickman were standing when the animation ended looked weird as f**k xD I felt like the entire animation went a bit fast too, but that might just have been me. Anyways good job, man. You've got a lot of potential, just keep working at it.
Another problem is your poses. I know nothing about backflips, so I can't tell if the poses in the backflip are unrealistic, and such, but the way the stickman were standing when the animation ended looked weird as f**k xD I felt like the entire animation went a bit fast too, but that might just have been me. Anyways good job, man. You've got a lot of potential, just keep working at it.
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Re: ajS - MAKE IT STAHP!!!!
Towelie wrote:Alright. The first issue I noticed is the footplacement. If you look at his feet, you can see that they are shaking up and down, which doesn't make sense. And when he lands, he lands a lot longer down than where he started. As he moves his front leg back he also slides backwards. To avoid shakyness, you should go through your animation frame by frame in pivot, and make sure his legs are at the exact same spot the entire time(unless he's moving his foot away from the current position). Adding a ground usually helps.
Another problem is your poses. I know nothing about backflips, so I can't tell if the poses in the backflip are unrealistic, and such, but the way the stickman were standing when the animation ended looked weird as fuck xD I felt like the entire animation went a bit fast too, but that might just have been me. Anyways good job, man. You've got a lot of potential, just keep working at it.
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Re: ajS - MAKE IT STAHP!!!!
Looks a lot better now, man. His footplacement is still off after he landed, though. And you should try ending the movement completely. He just stops at a weird pose. Fix that and the whole animation will look a lot better. For a first backflip it's really good, though
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Re: ajS - MAKE IT STAHP!!!!
I remember my first backflip looked Like that. Close to high novice, Good job.
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Re: ajS - MAKE IT STAHP!!!!
Work your foot placement. I see no flaws except foot placement. Well done :>
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The running should be a bit smoother than that, it's way too fast. Also, he didn't seem like jumping, try to make the spacing a bit closer to each other because it looks too fast and unrealistic. The physics is nice and the front flip was OK, I guess. You need to work on your poses, flow, and foot placement. Though, you've done better than before so keep it up! ^^
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Update (Note: The "Wraybies Inspired" animation is supposed to be stiff at the end)
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I think it looked great until after the back hand springs when he jumped up and did the twirl in the air. At that point, he was a bit shaky, but i must say, i really liked it . I really liked the footplacement thoug Hm.... Id say if u fixed the shakiness, you would be high beg, maybe borderline interz . Keep it up
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Re: ajS - MAKE IT STAHP!!!!
ADDED NEW ANIMATION: be careful though there is alot of lag in the piv due to the effect of the slashing.
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