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Post by ~tmR on Mon Jan 14, 2013 10:16 am


Tip: Click the animation for larger/normal version.
* - It's a shit.
* - Maybe.
* - Epic work.

If you want the .PIV files, you may PM me.


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Re: ~tmR's Animations - OmegaBert Combo

Post by Towelie on Mon Jan 14, 2013 4:22 pm

The run looks excelent, and the flip is quite good too. I felt like it went a bit fast, but that might just be me. The main problem that caught my eye was the landing. The legs should have bent slightly more, and his back should have been bent forward, since he just landed from. There were also some minor flaws in the footplacement after he landed. Good job, man.
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Post by ajS on Mon Jan 14, 2013 5:06 pm

yea the landing is a problem. I think you should fix that. Other than that I'd say high novice.

(But remember on this forum, (since there are only 3 ranks) you must have alotta perfection) Wink

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Post by JojoI3a on Mon Jan 14, 2013 5:14 pm

well, the flip is too fast, it seems like his momentum suddenly increases after, and maybe even before the bounce off the wall, it could use some frames in between. Also, the run was good, but it seemed a little bit too rushed.
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Post by ~tmR on Tue Jan 15, 2013 9:09 am

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Post by TOLBIAS on Wed Jan 16, 2013 1:27 am

I like the landing on your wall flip looks realistic.
The only fault I see is when he was in mid-air, It looked kinda rushed. But maybe thats just me
Good Job in advance High beg-low interz.

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Post by Horizon on Wed Jan 16, 2013 9:08 am

Really nice fps on the newest wallflip animation, the spacing is good and the frames after the landing were good as well.
I reckon there should've been more tucking while in mid-air, so it wouldn't look as if he was about to fall flat on his belly.
Your Mitchez Inspired is Intermediate quality, too. Very smooth but powerful punches and kicks.
Very well done, I hope to see you moved up soon.
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Post by Neo on Wed Jan 16, 2013 8:27 pm

That was ok, but the fps was a little too high and he went a bit too far back for my liking and the way the arms shortened didn't work and it seemed like you were just using the stick length changing for the sake of it, instead of a proper use, however the run up and most of the build up were fabulously done considering your skill. I don't know much about ranks but this is easily high beginner standard on dd, but due to pivot for I'm not sure about ranks, Imma go with border to intermediates.

For the mitchez tribute I think you saved the gif wrong because it was going really slow. But I don't mind too much. I would say the slow pacing was excellently done and it was all good until he hit the ground after smashing into the wall, the legs were really stiff and it looked like he was sort of very hard or broke his back. A normal person wouldn't bounce that much and his legs were really stiff and would have bent a little more than they did, I think that is also border to intermediate.

Keep up the good work mate!
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Post by ~tmR on Sat Jan 19, 2013 8:46 am

Thanks guys. Update!
HINT: Recommending larger/normal version on this one, because smaller version is bit fast.
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Post by Neo on Sat Jan 19, 2013 11:29 am

That was easily intermediate mate. I can't really spot any major flaws except I think it's a real feat to be able to punch that quickly. Other than that I think you're on you're way, I also think that some of your others were intermediate, except the wallflip, keep up the good work and they'll move you up in no time!
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Post by TOLBIAS on Sat Jan 19, 2013 8:18 pm

~Moved to interz

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Post by Inevitable on Sat Jan 19, 2013 8:42 pm

Defiantly deserved. Welcome to the club, mate. Smile
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Post by Towelie on Sun Jan 20, 2013 12:08 am

Gratz on interz, bro. You deserved it :>
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Post by JojoI3a on Sun Jan 20, 2013 12:11 am

congratulations man, congratulations. pig
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Re: ~tmR's Animations - OmegaBert Combo

Post by Juke on Sun Jan 20, 2013 2:24 am

Well done man.

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Post by ~tmR on Sun Jan 20, 2013 10:10 am

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Thanks, guys Very Happy.
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Post by Static on Sun Jan 20, 2013 3:09 pm

Congratulations on the move up. Very Happy
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