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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by Inevitable on Mon Jan 14, 2013 9:22 pm

Nice animations you got there. Alright...

Jumpy fall: The physics was a bit off, he should have fallen a bit faster than that. Plus, the poses seem a bit un-realistic (IMO) Also, it looks kinda stiff.
Imprisoned: It's way too short to be CC'd but what the heck. It's really cool to see such, If you can continue, continue it. I don't see a lot of flaws. (The last part where he fell on the ground seemed a bit eccentric.)
Wall-flip: It didn't seem like he jumped on the wall, plus the second flip was kinda awkward but you can pass it (I'm not sure. <_<) Other than that, it's nice. Keep it up!

Well, lets say you're close to Intermediate. Around High Novice to Borderlines Intermediate. Smile
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by Towelie on Mon Jan 14, 2013 9:25 pm

Jumpy fall is amazing. It's moving a little bit slow as if gravity fucked up, but except for that, it looks great. It's just a bit over eased, but it still looks wonderful. Imprisoned also looks good. I'd be happy to see it finished. So far it looks excellent. Nothing to say about the animation. It all looks good.

The wallflip is not at the same level as your other animations. It is in fact worse. Which is probably discouraging to hear, and I'm sorry if it is. You have a big problem when it comes to stiffness. When he was running, his back didn't move at all. The backflip was fine, and the flip afterwards looks alright, although anyone who cares for realism would say that it is impossible to bounce on your hands like he did. I don't care aobut realism. I think the animation could be improved, but it's still enjoyable. Good job, man. Keep it up :]
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by Neo on Wed Jan 16, 2013 8:53 pm

that was pretty nice, I think that it's good you try a such movement, I would say that still the neck poses on the man were way too curled in and that pose can't be maintained for more than 3 or 4 frames, I think it should have opened out, but that was a minor flaw, but I think there more important issue is the way he started to curl in before pushing off, I think it would have been better if he straightened out and then just jumped higher, after that the animation was pretty good and there are a few other smaller things I could say but I'm just going to leave it at that, I would say high novice.
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Mon Jan 21, 2013 5:20 am

Finally got round to updating this Smile

Thanks for the comments, they were really helpful
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Sat Jan 26, 2013 6:18 am

Updated again Smile
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by JojoI3a on Sat Jan 26, 2013 4:02 pm

Now that animation seemed like very nice work, there were only few problems I could see: the footplacement, the stiff head, fix that and the rushed hands in the end, fix those and you're ready for inters I believe. Thumbs up
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Mon Jan 28, 2013 11:00 pm

Another new one, and thanks for the comments Smile
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by JojoI3a on Tue Jan 29, 2013 12:16 am

I'll make you a move up thread as soon as you fix that arm transition, it looks too fast and too sudden.
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by Inevitable on Tue Jan 29, 2013 6:24 am

I honestly think you're ready for intermediate. Well done, Kieth.
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Fri Feb 01, 2013 1:14 am

Thankyou Smile

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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:11 am

Another update Smile

I got bored, so I just animated randomly.
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Sat Feb 16, 2013 10:08 pm

Another big update Smile
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by JojoI3a on Sun Feb 17, 2013 5:19 pm

I believe that is intermediate material. Make it a bit longer and you'll probably get a move up. Wink
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Sat Feb 23, 2013 5:27 pm

Another update Smile
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by ajS on Tue Feb 26, 2013 7:56 am

You are not quite there yet. Although if you add more power and more easing, your next anim will be intermediate.

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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Mon Mar 04, 2013 10:44 pm

Thanks, and updated Smile
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by TOLBIAS on Tue Mar 05, 2013 2:36 am

I'd say your high beginner your movements look weird to me, I think its just me, but they seem stop and goish. Escpicially thet dead end animation. The way he sat down so fast looked unrealistic. Like he didn't even look at the wall, he just instantly sat down.

High beginner.

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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by Slipstream on Wed Mar 06, 2013 7:18 am

I could see you in the intermediates section if you put some time into a decent length animation with some more actual movements put in. Right now, I'd say high beginner.

You should branch out more, the stuff like square and air fight were pretty decent. What brought those animations down was the lack of actual movement. You more-or-less covered basic movements with effects and cinematic.

If you incorporate movements like your newest into a moderate length animation, you could see yourself getting intermediates sometime in the future c:
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Mon Mar 11, 2013 1:52 am

Thanks for the comments, and I've just started making a bigger animation Smile

But for now, here are some more small ones!
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by ajS on Mon Mar 11, 2013 5:19 am

I rly dunno what to say about the newest animation :c

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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by TOLBIAS on Mon Mar 11, 2013 7:21 am

Your newest animatino was rather weird and didb't have alot of movemtns for it to be judged. Make an animation with more movements and such.

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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by Pivotfantasy on Sat Mar 30, 2013 7:58 pm

That looks pretty good man Smile... The only problem I have is how when hey gets tripped and lands on his back, his lower legs like suddenly go down.. I would have just let his lower legs float in the air and hit the ground aligned with his upper legs.. Idk, maybe that's just me.
I would say you about interz man... Get some more anims like that, and you will be there no problem
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by ajS on Sun Mar 31, 2013 8:14 am

High Beginner for now. Your movements are a bit weird, maybe if you could make a more serious animation we would be able to really move you to Intermediates

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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Mon Apr 01, 2013 3:52 am

Finally got round to updating this Smile
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by ajS on Mon Apr 01, 2013 6:43 am

LOL we are not dead. Just not that live

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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Sun Apr 07, 2013 11:40 pm

A new one Smile
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by ajS on Tue Apr 16, 2013 7:18 am

Considering your newest animation that I saw on PA, I'll move you up.

Congratulations you have just become an Intermediate Thumbs up

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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by kieth1 on Tue Jul 02, 2013 12:40 am

I updated :O

Although I'm not sure how active it is round here now though...
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Re: Kieth's animations

Post by TOLBIAS on Tue Jul 02, 2013 8:57 pm

Its an on and off activity. I like your newest animation, Nice flow. Keep it up.

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