Yoshi's Domain.
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Yoshi's Domain.
by Yoshi Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:11 pm
If you've stumbled upon this thread, chances are, you're lost. But no need to fear, lowly traveler, as you have found a sacred domain in which only the strongest lurk. You are currently in my Pivot Animation thread, where I obviously post Pivot Animations. My rank is currently Novice, so don't expect anything too good from me right now. If you post in this thread, jut remember to be a good sport and provide me with good CC. (emphasis on good)
Newest: Animation Practice 2 | The Flip
The Gallery
Animation Practice 1 | The Run
Also, Piv. files will be provided if they are requested enough.
Newest: Animation Practice 2 | The Flip
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The Gallery
Animation Practice 1 | The Run
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Also, Piv. files will be provided if they are requested enough.
Last edited by Yoshi on Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:43 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Yoshi's Domain.
by ~tmR Wed Jan 09, 2013 3:47 pm
Hello, Yoshi! Thanks for joining the forum. You're close to Intermediate, however it's just a run loop. Next time make longer animations that we can rank.
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Re: Yoshi's Domain.
by Towelie Wed Jan 09, 2013 6:08 pm
Looks nice. Not much to say, since it's just a run. I'm not a big fan of the high fps kinda over easing style, but that's just me, lol 
Good job.
Good job. 
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Re: Yoshi's Domain.
by JojoI3a Thu Jan 10, 2013 4:01 pm
the animation is pretty nice and smooth, make something longer
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Re: Yoshi's Domain.
by ~Merkury Fri Jan 11, 2013 7:46 pm
actually, quite the contrary. Your animation is a bit jumpy & the poses are all wierd. When doing basic movements such as a run loop, have the stickman be in a similar area to the first frame. you want it too look like theres a real man running endlessly. so the loop has to be smooth. apart from that the animation is so short since it is just a test so I recommend trying a 30 day animation project. Just animate an anima tio on a day for an entire month & you will see great improvement. You can animate tests all you want:)
Yeah, that too.
Yeah, that too.
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Re: Yoshi's Domain.
by Inevitable Sun Jan 13, 2013 3:01 pm
The loop run is really nice. Make a longer animation, I really want to see that from you <3
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Re: Yoshi's Domain.
by JojoI3a Mon Feb 18, 2013 7:42 pm
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- Now that actually looked very nice. With a bit more editing it would make quite an awesome animation. Now, for the cc. The animation itself could use a bit more easing one the beginning, and in the end the flow of the animation gets corrupted. You should probably make yourself a floor stick, or put the stick man in the bottom of the screen so that way you could keep the foot on the same height, that would be at least a bit of progress. The cartwheel itself was quite good, but it would take a bit more power-up (bending the knee) to make it so fast. The movement stops in a frame close to the end, find it and terminate it. Also, move every joint every frame, ease and do proper spacing. You know how to do that, right?
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Re: Yoshi's Domain.
by TOLBIAS Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:30 am
You seem to have teh basics of pivot down well.
~Moved to Intermediate~
~Moved to Intermediate~
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Re: Yoshi's Domain.
by Pivotfantasy Sat Jul 13, 2013 10:21 am
I dont think hes high beg man.. Ur movements are weird at times, and the transitions within the movements could be better. The spacing is kinda wierd, and u need to work on general easing. I think ur med beg man.
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