Minifrij's Domain
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Minifrij's Domain
So yeah, I am Minifrij and I am from DarkDemon and Pivot Animation. Feel free to rank my animations and give me creative criticism. I will return courtesy (If you even have it here), but only if you have given me a decent/helpful comment. Here are my animations:
Newer stuff:
Joint with Static:
Ignore the flashes of grey, it's Pivot 4's gif saving.
Better spin kick with effects:
Basketball animation:
Ninja combo:
Ninja spinkick:
Pickaxe thing:
If you want any pivs or sticks (Which I doubt you do), just ask! I hope you enjoy my animations
Newer stuff:
Joint with Static:
Ignore the flashes of grey, it's Pivot 4's gif saving.
Better spin kick with effects:
- Spoiler:
Basketball animation:
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Ninja combo:
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Ninja spinkick:
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Pickaxe thing:
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If you want any pivs or sticks (Which I doubt you do), just ask! I hope you enjoy my animations
Last edited by Minifrij on Sun Jan 20, 2013 10:05 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: Minifrij's Domain
That is a very good animation sir, almost intermediate quality, but I don't think there's enough movements there to move you up. Keep doing what you're doing, maybe fix a little foot placement, and also, could you provide me with that stick? I would love to use it.
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Re: Minifrij's Domain
: Excellent effects and wonderful colour scheme. Good use of anticipation and demonstrated great knowledge of animation. Poses were spot on.
: The trails would possibly be nicer in blue Imo. The back arm is a bit shaky at the beginning too. His back is a bit stiff, give it some movement. Also, I think that's my base?
Rank: High novice.
Now make me rank squad god dammit.
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Re: Minifrij's Domain
If you mean the base then it's Static's with a bit of a shortened neck, so 100% credit goes to him.JojoI3a wrote:
and also, could you provide me with that stick? I would love to use it.
http://www.sendspace.com/file/w7vtsg
And thank you very much Static, I will make sure to do that whenever I try this again, which I doubt will be very far away
Re: Minifrij's Domain
Thanks.
Maybe we should do a joint sometime (but simple so I don't fail again) =p.
Maybe we should do a joint sometime (but simple so I don't fail again) =p.
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Re: Minifrij's Domain
I would love toStatic wrote:Thanks.
Maybe we should do a joint sometime (but simple so I don't fail again) =p.
Updated with a joint with Static
- Spoiler:
Re: Minifrij's Domain
I like your newset joint. But it seems you lack foot placement a little, you though have skill in FX.
On your BasketBall animation thats jump seemed a litle, out of nowhere-ish, I didn't look like there was any anticipation. But its not finished so I cant rank the animation fully.
Like static said, the trail could have been a bit better. Also I see little mistskes within the foot placement of that animation. Its good, but it could have been better.
I'd say Border interz (More close to high novice though)
On your BasketBall animation thats jump seemed a litle, out of nowhere-ish, I didn't look like there was any anticipation. But its not finished so I cant rank the animation fully.
Like static said, the trail could have been a bit better. Also I see little mistskes within the foot placement of that animation. Its good, but it could have been better.
I'd say Border interz (More close to high novice though)
Re: Minifrij's Domain
Some of the foot placement issues are to do with Pivot 4's gif saving. But I'll be sure to keep my foot placement perfect on my next animation. I do have quite a few problems with anticipation, but again I will make sure to try and perfect it in my next animations. Thanks for the feedback
Re: Minifrij's Domain
Minifrij wrote:I would love toStatic wrote:Thanks.
Maybe we should do a joint sometime (but simple so I don't fail again) =p.
Updated with a joint with Static
- Spoiler:
Well I've just started something. I may finish it today, before Wednesday at least.
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