Kieth's animations
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Am I Intermediate?
Kieth's animations
My newest animation:
Newest:
Newest:
- Spoiler:
- Trampoline
Sonic Practise
That's not Physics!
Not Quite so New:
Horse Trouble!
Running Fail
Dummy's Playground
Click
Purple Fun
Sword Fun
Stair Fall
Poor Judgement
Show off
Effects Practice
Running Practice
Sword Practice
Actions
Run and Punch
flippy kicks
too random for a name
Dead End
square
frontflip
Flying attack
Dust effect...thing
Evil Floors
Blood/sword Test
Flop
Jump Kick
Kickin'
Spin
Wallflip
Pivot 4 test
Last edited by kieth1 on Tue Jul 02, 2013 12:37 am; edited 15 times in total
kieth1- Posts : 18
Join date : 2013-01-14
Re: Kieth's animations
Nice animations you got there. Alright...
Jumpy fall: The physics was a bit off, he should have fallen a bit faster than that. Plus, the poses seem a bit un-realistic (IMO) Also, it looks kinda stiff.
Imprisoned: It's way too short to be CC'd but what the heck. It's really cool to see such, If you can continue, continue it. I don't see a lot of flaws. (The last part where he fell on the ground seemed a bit eccentric.)
Wall-flip: It didn't seem like he jumped on the wall, plus the second flip was kinda awkward but you can pass it (I'm not sure. <_<) Other than that, it's nice. Keep it up!
Well, lets say you're close to Intermediate. Around High Novice to Borderlines Intermediate.
Jumpy fall: The physics was a bit off, he should have fallen a bit faster than that. Plus, the poses seem a bit un-realistic (IMO) Also, it looks kinda stiff.
Imprisoned: It's way too short to be CC'd but what the heck. It's really cool to see such, If you can continue, continue it. I don't see a lot of flaws. (The last part where he fell on the ground seemed a bit eccentric.)
Wall-flip: It didn't seem like he jumped on the wall, plus the second flip was kinda awkward but you can pass it (I'm not sure. <_<) Other than that, it's nice. Keep it up!
Well, lets say you're close to Intermediate. Around High Novice to Borderlines Intermediate.
Re: Kieth's animations
Jumpy fall is amazing. It's moving a little bit slow as if gravity fucked up, but except for that, it looks great. It's just a bit over eased, but it still looks wonderful. Imprisoned also looks good. I'd be happy to see it finished. So far it looks excellent. Nothing to say about the animation. It all looks good.
The wallflip is not at the same level as your other animations. It is in fact worse. Which is probably discouraging to hear, and I'm sorry if it is. You have a big problem when it comes to stiffness. When he was running, his back didn't move at all. The backflip was fine, and the flip afterwards looks alright, although anyone who cares for realism would say that it is impossible to bounce on your hands like he did. I don't care aobut realism. I think the animation could be improved, but it's still enjoyable. Good job, man. Keep it up :]
The wallflip is not at the same level as your other animations. It is in fact worse. Which is probably discouraging to hear, and I'm sorry if it is. You have a big problem when it comes to stiffness. When he was running, his back didn't move at all. The backflip was fine, and the flip afterwards looks alright, although anyone who cares for realism would say that it is impossible to bounce on your hands like he did. I don't care aobut realism. I think the animation could be improved, but it's still enjoyable. Good job, man. Keep it up :]
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Re: Kieth's animations
that was pretty nice, I think that it's good you try a such movement, I would say that still the neck poses on the man were way too curled in and that pose can't be maintained for more than 3 or 4 frames, I think it should have opened out, but that was a minor flaw, but I think there more important issue is the way he started to curl in before pushing off, I think it would have been better if he straightened out and then just jumped higher, after that the animation was pretty good and there are a few other smaller things I could say but I'm just going to leave it at that, I would say high novice.
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Re: Kieth's animations
Finally got round to updating this
Thanks for the comments, they were really helpful
Thanks for the comments, they were really helpful
kieth1- Posts : 18
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Re: Kieth's animations
Now that animation seemed like very nice work, there were only few problems I could see: the footplacement, the stiff head, fix that and the rushed hands in the end, fix those and you're ready for inters I believe.
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Re: Kieth's animations
Another new one, and thanks for the comments
kieth1- Posts : 18
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Re: Kieth's animations
I'll make you a move up thread as soon as you fix that arm transition, it looks too fast and too sudden.
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Re: Kieth's animations
Thankyou
Updated, with my first ever blood test
Updated, with my first ever blood test
kieth1- Posts : 18
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Re: Kieth's animations
Another update
I got bored, so I just animated randomly.
I got bored, so I just animated randomly.
kieth1- Posts : 18
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Re: Kieth's animations
I believe that is intermediate material. Make it a bit longer and you'll probably get a move up.
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Re: Kieth's animations
You are not quite there yet. Although if you add more power and more easing, your next anim will be intermediate.
Re: Kieth's animations
I'd say your high beginner your movements look weird to me, I think its just me, but they seem stop and goish. Escpicially thet dead end animation. The way he sat down so fast looked unrealistic. Like he didn't even look at the wall, he just instantly sat down.
High beginner.
High beginner.
Re: Kieth's animations
I could see you in the intermediates section if you put some time into a decent length animation with some more actual movements put in. Right now, I'd say high beginner.
You should branch out more, the stuff like square and air fight were pretty decent. What brought those animations down was the lack of actual movement. You more-or-less covered basic movements with effects and cinematic.
If you incorporate movements like your newest into a moderate length animation, you could see yourself getting intermediates sometime in the future c:
You should branch out more, the stuff like square and air fight were pretty decent. What brought those animations down was the lack of actual movement. You more-or-less covered basic movements with effects and cinematic.
If you incorporate movements like your newest into a moderate length animation, you could see yourself getting intermediates sometime in the future c:
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Re: Kieth's animations
Thanks for the comments, and I've just started making a bigger animation
But for now, here are some more small ones!
But for now, here are some more small ones!
kieth1- Posts : 18
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Re: Kieth's animations
Your newest animatino was rather weird and didb't have alot of movemtns for it to be judged. Make an animation with more movements and such.
Re: Kieth's animations
That looks pretty good man ... The only problem I have is how when hey gets tripped and lands on his back, his lower legs like suddenly go down.. I would have just let his lower legs float in the air and hit the ground aligned with his upper legs.. Idk, maybe that's just me.
I would say you about interz man... Get some more anims like that, and you will be there no problem
I would say you about interz man... Get some more anims like that, and you will be there no problem
Pivotfantasy- Posts : 43
Join date : 2013-01-17
Re: Kieth's animations
High Beginner for now. Your movements are a bit weird, maybe if you could make a more serious animation we would be able to really move you to Intermediates
Re: Kieth's animations
Considering your newest animation that I saw on PA, I'll move you up.
Congratulations you have just become an Intermediate
Congratulations you have just become an Intermediate
Re: Kieth's animations
I updated :O
Although I'm not sure how active it is round here now though...
Although I'm not sure how active it is round here now though...
kieth1- Posts : 18
Join date : 2013-01-14
Re: Kieth's animations
Its an on and off activity. I like your newest animation, Nice flow. Keep it up.
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